tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post1720151046831413504..comments2020-12-12T19:43:51.114+01:00Comments on Moonlight and Sims: A Pair of Brown Eyes: Chapter 17Marsarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-47136246052166867562015-01-22T10:43:36.104+01:002015-01-22T10:43:36.104+01:00Awww, I don't know what to say: I feel honoure...Awww, I don't know what to say: I feel honoured that you should think so about my story :-).<br /><br />Yes, sadly, Claire is an "expert" at calling herself all sorts of nasty names :-(.<br /><br />I try to write as honestly as I can, and this story has both light and darkness.<br /><br />Thank you so much for your comment :-).Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-81489150974565167862015-01-16T00:07:58.250+01:002015-01-16T00:07:58.250+01:00"Claire hated septembers..."
That openi..."Claire hated septembers..."<br /><br />That opening line is to die for, so beautiful, so poetical! One could digress forever on that -- but I enjoy that your text is so concise and elegant, Marta.<br /><br />Tainted is a horrible word, and it's even worse that Claire should feel that way. <br /><br />I love it how you place the lovely scene of the girls gathering around Claire to Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10000213495439627694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-9950741471910451392014-10-27T13:53:35.081+01:002014-10-27T13:53:35.081+01:00From your next comment, I gather you've sorted...From your next comment, I gather you've sorted this age thing by yourself, right? Because eleven years back from the present Claire was actually fifteen.<br /><br />It is quite, quite, quite a long time... :'-(<br /><br />Thank you for reading.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-87843830493665912552014-10-27T00:31:32.459+01:002014-10-27T00:31:32.459+01:0011 years??!! That would make her 36 now? And Andre...11 years??!! That would make her 36 now? And Andrew is 45? He's a good looking 45...sheesh!<br /><br />Also, 11 fricking years!? That's a long time to be in an abusive relationship.<br /><br />Also, also...you've hinted at the skin thing and her not wanting to show it...and scars on her belly, aching shoulder...JESUS!! I'm so glad she got out.blythelyrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14489985906278574957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-52137319871525884542014-08-05T11:21:24.661+02:002014-08-05T11:21:24.661+02:00Thanks so much, you're making me blush :-). Wh...Thanks so much, you're making me blush :-). Whatever it is you're thinking about her father, you're probably right, I'm afraid... :-(.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-17377167925648322792014-08-04T22:11:49.681+02:002014-08-04T22:11:49.681+02:00Your flashback pictures are breathtaking! Oh, and ...Your flashback pictures are breathtaking! Oh, and this poor girl. I feel so sad for Claire, and I have a very bad feeling about what her Father is about to tell her. :( You're doing a fantastic job of showing little glimpses into the past and slowly revealing information. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-33566261765584047992014-06-13T14:11:48.093+02:002014-06-13T14:11:48.093+02:00Hehe, I like revealing things at Claire's &quo...Hehe, I like revealing things at Claire's "pace", so to speak. <br /><br />Poor Claire, she was once so lively... and now, she's just the opposite :-(.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-77264180452303501932014-06-13T01:17:40.160+02:002014-06-13T01:17:40.160+02:00I would hate September too. I think anyone would. ...I would hate September too. I think anyone would. Poor thing! It's all starting to come together now. I love how you've revealed things little by little! <br /><br />It's so sad to see how she once was so carefree and now she's anything but.sandybeachgirl2https://www.blogger.com/profile/00114726544153905317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-72447584775836353822014-03-25T18:22:36.329+01:002014-03-25T18:22:36.329+01:00Oh, it is foreboding, indeed! And he probably blam...Oh, it is foreboding, indeed! And he probably blames poor Claire for many things which could have never been her fault :-(.<br /><br />Thank you so much for reading.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-24849793034350507542014-03-25T13:03:09.850+01:002014-03-25T13:03:09.850+01:00Her father's summons is rather foreboding. I ...Her father's summons is rather foreboding. I can't see him being an understanding man. I no doubt think that everything that happened will be her fault for being a female.Zhippidyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12570869365967598793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-11187746239045598922014-03-20T12:44:22.483+01:002014-03-20T12:44:22.483+01:00Aww, I think I'm blushing right now. And perha...Aww, I think I'm blushing right now. And perhaps she'll have fonder memories of THIS september as well ;-).<br /><br />Thanks so much for reading :-D.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-32488476811017117602014-03-19T18:11:33.066+01:002014-03-19T18:11:33.066+01:00I love the flashback scenes, you always do such a ...I love the flashback scenes, you always do such a fantastic job with them, and the pictures are stunning as always. This September will pass too, and hopefully next September will have happier memories for Claire.Valprehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15992942004048836531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-62828924907254024722014-03-18T14:22:48.770+01:002014-03-18T14:22:48.770+01:00She's been pretty much lonely her entire life,...She's been pretty much lonely her entire life, poor Claire! :-(. And yes, her father made things worse: negligent parents always do!<br /><br />Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad you loved the flashbacks, you know I'm practically addicted to them ;-P.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-87364025386306788142014-03-18T06:25:12.374+01:002014-03-18T06:25:12.374+01:00Aww, I feel for Claire. I also have a strong feeli...Aww, I feel for Claire. I also have a strong feeling that her dad didn't help her through all of this, I bet he made it worse. She doesn't seem to have much family support in all this D: <br /><br />I loved the flashbacks! They were great insight into who Claire is which they always are!Aeonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18103860984381123885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-55905348712144177382014-03-10T08:19:20.312+01:002014-03-10T08:19:20.312+01:00Awww, I was sure you'd miss him ;-). Sorry, it...Awww, I was sure you'd miss him ;-). Sorry, it just couldn't be helped, LOL. There'll be plenty of him in next chapter.<br /><br />Thank you so much for reading :-D.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-7993302015006498612014-03-09T01:13:48.941+01:002014-03-09T01:13:48.941+01:00Good chapter. Although Im missing one of my favori...Good chapter. Although Im missing one of my favorite male leads of all times, but it was good to get more information on Claire's past. I only hope she can realize how close to being happy she is this time. beccahttp://thornheartssims.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-78790326099324303012014-03-04T15:41:10.314+01:002014-03-04T15:41:10.314+01:00Ominous, indeed! :-(
Poor Claire is all alone in ...Ominous, indeed! :-(<br /><br />Poor Claire is all alone in the world, so unfortunately she has no one to tell her not to blame herself for things that are obviously not her fault :-(.<br /><br />Playing the piano is a very important thing for her, there's no doubt about it.<br /><br />Thanks so much for reading and for your feedback :-D.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-60697855946563145862014-03-04T02:35:01.738+01:002014-03-04T02:35:01.738+01:00Those last two pictures are so ominous. The flashb...Those last two pictures are so ominous. The flashbacks are great and I'm so curious to learn more about her family. I'd like to believe that her mother would be someone she could confide in. If she blames herself for her mother's death, I imagine that her father had guilted her. Such a shame to place blame on something like that. <br />It's really telling about Claire's Chamberedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04078626108742808290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-59614623380632052272014-03-02T20:39:08.118+01:002014-03-02T20:39:08.118+01:00My lips are sealed ;-).
I'm glad you liked th...My lips are sealed ;-).<br /><br />I'm glad you liked those pics, and thanks so much for reading :-D.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-73683175195914064462014-03-02T03:27:12.865+01:002014-03-02T03:27:12.865+01:00*pouts* no Andrew?
/sigh. I guess I'll have to...*pouts* no Andrew?<br />/sigh. I guess I'll have to wait.<br />Those pics with the little girls are simply adorable!<br />I'm with Lily. I'll bet her father is about to tell her about her arranged marriage. Of course, you won't say. ;)mypalsim1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08612512921461620603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-41641007421479072042014-03-01T11:06:15.741+01:002014-03-01T11:06:15.741+01:00Hmm... ¿si?Hmm... ¿si?Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-58699478757154067442014-02-28T21:31:17.613+01:002014-02-28T21:31:17.613+01:00Qué bonicos los Sims.Qué bonicos los Sims.XXXXXXhttp://jordim.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-33426548532107167132014-02-28T11:02:57.708+01:002014-02-28T11:02:57.708+01:00Aww, thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying the ...Aww, thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying the story :-D.<br /><br />Thanks so much for reading.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-25666053242705095772014-02-28T05:15:08.153+01:002014-02-28T05:15:08.153+01:00I don't know if I commented before, but I am l...I don't know if I commented before, but I am loving your writing and you style very much :D<br />Very much am I adoring Claire, I do feel sorry for her, but at the same time, I can't help but just adore her as well.<br />IvoryIvoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16489529489721217423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-66640780343431391472014-02-25T13:54:03.440+01:002014-02-25T13:54:03.440+01:00Absolutely! Yes, unfortunately it's as dreadfu...Absolutely! Yes, unfortunately it's as dreadful an anniversary as it can be :-(.<br /><br />LOL, I sometimes use my warnings as a comic relief of sorts, hahaha.<br /><br />I can't say much (yet), but yes, you may be right in that. He might have resented her for that -cruel and unfounded- reason. Besides, daughters were not very "valuable", to begin with.<br /><br />:-D I'mMarsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.com