tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post5235284747242185598..comments2020-12-12T19:43:51.114+01:00Comments on Moonlight and Sims: A Pair of Brown Eyes: Chapter 12Marsarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-70710600567901895462014-09-10T12:37:17.211+02:002014-09-10T12:37:17.211+02:00No, please, don't apologize, I don't think...No, please, don't apologize, I don't think you misinterpreted Andrew's intentions: he may not have wanted to be disrespectful, but he DID act a bit too possessively. Besides, having readers express their opinions as I go is part of the fun – and learning process – of writing in blog-format.<br /><br />Well, yes, I thought I needed a little "trick" ;-) to move the story Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-88512400951124403872014-09-08T17:42:45.161+02:002014-09-08T17:42:45.161+02:00So I apologize for having misinterpreted Andrew...So I apologize for having misinterpreted Andrew's advance on Claire as disrespectful.<br /><br />Maybe that was the only way to precipitate things and overcome her resistance for men approaching her.<br /><br />I confess I was surprised at her reaction. I expected she would run away, and despite her initial fear, she actually enjoyed being taken. This gives me hope that she is on her way to Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10000213495439627694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-63587654014254567862014-08-05T11:12:09.480+02:002014-08-05T11:12:09.480+02:00Awww, thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it :-...Awww, thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it :-D. I only showed you my "best" lots; they tend to look awful, actually, but well, they serve my purpose, LOL.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-42243404194504502702014-08-04T09:07:19.771+02:002014-08-04T09:07:19.771+02:00Awww yay. First of all, I LOVE all the corny senti...Awww yay. First of all, I LOVE all the corny sentiment! That's what romance us all about and this chapter was beautifully written! I loved seeing your lots too! Mine are such a mess and so ugly, haha. Like a cheap movie set. But hey, as long as you take great pictures, who cares what they look like, right? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-9692584513742385132014-06-13T12:53:48.956+02:002014-06-13T12:53:48.956+02:00Giddy, hey? :-D :-D :-D Nah, this is no time to th...Giddy, hey? :-D :-D :-D Nah, this is no time to think of the prologue... ;-)Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-87080289141994799122014-06-13T00:23:42.975+02:002014-06-13T00:23:42.975+02:00So good!!! EEEE! I'm all giddy until I remembe...So good!!! EEEE! I'm all giddy until I remember the prologue. . .I hope whatever that was isn't the end. For right now, I'll try to stay in the moment since that's a much happier place. :Dsandybeachgirl2https://www.blogger.com/profile/00114726544153905317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-18027224934940707692013-12-19T09:53:38.709+01:002013-12-19T09:53:38.709+01:00Yay! Way to go, Andrew! Hehe. Oh, it was horrifyin...Yay! Way to go, Andrew! Hehe. Oh, it was horrifying, her past is anything but pleasant :'-(.<br /><br />Aww, thanks. Cringing over my stuff has become second nature to me LOL. Anyway, I'm glad you didn't think it was corny.<br /><br />Hehe, the ship :-D.<br /><br />Thanks for reading.Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-65843664434261436382013-12-19T02:21:37.124+01:002013-12-19T02:21:37.124+01:00Good for Andrew going in for the kiss! The scene f...Good for Andrew going in for the kiss! The scene from the previous chapter with Claire getting abused was horrifying and I can understand her hesitations when Andrew kissed her.<br />Aww and the chapter wasn't corny at all! Though sometimes I read back over my stuff and cringe a little, thinking it is corny too so I can see where you're coming from. :)<br />oooh love seeing the builds! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-85466991670786409952013-12-12T15:08:05.520+01:002013-12-12T15:08:05.520+01:00Poor Claire, it's so foreign to her that Andre...Poor Claire, it's so foreign to her that Andrew should JUST want to kiss her and not, say, rape her straight away!<br /><br />Thanks for reading :-).Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-40547844906689552192013-12-12T15:03:31.084+01:002013-12-12T15:03:31.084+01:00Oh, yes, the prologue... She DOES refuse him, and ...Oh, yes, the prologue... She DOES refuse him, and that's all I'm saying ;-P.<br /><br />Thanks for reading and for your feedback, I really appreciate it! :-DMarsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-72807594845827428862013-12-12T04:53:43.116+01:002013-12-12T04:53:43.116+01:00Man I am afraid that Claire's past is going to...Man I am afraid that Claire's past is going to make it harder for her to be happy. I don't blame her for feeling hesitant. After what happened in her past, no one can blame her. Andrew would be so good for her so I hope somehow she can learn to trust him and love him. Colorist40noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-11637550622249014572013-12-11T18:11:09.628+01:002013-12-11T18:11:09.628+01:00I loved this chapter. However, I'm anxious. By...I loved this chapter. However, I'm anxious. By the prologue I can tell she refuses him in a way later on. I hope it isn't for long. <br />I also enjoyed your extra on this chapter, I was wondering how you did the ship but now it has been clarified. Wonderful work. I really appreciate your time and effort into this because I know how much time and effort it takes me to take pictures for mybeccahttp://thornheartssims.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-3053817126814644942013-11-16T14:46:32.074+01:002013-11-16T14:46:32.074+01:00Aww, thanks, I DO try not to make this story too c...Aww, thanks, I DO try not to make this story too corny, but I'm not sure I always succeed LOL. Perhaps Andrew will have to prove he is a real man at some point in the future... who knows? ;-) And that is exactly what I had in mind while writing this chapter, "that man" having never kissed her >:-( meant that there was at least SOMETHING he hadn't tainted.<br /><br />Thanks Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-792268149610515472013-11-16T01:32:25.370+01:002013-11-16T01:32:25.370+01:00OK, so you may think it's corny, but I find it...OK, so you may think it's corny, but I find it endearing. Andrew is the perfect man for Claire. I look forward to Andrew helping Claire realize that REAL men don't hurt women -- they love and cherish them. ♥ It's a shame Claire had to wait so long for her first kiss, but I'm glad it was with a man like Andrew. At least kissing hasn't been tainted by that awful man from her LilyParkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558202097813699507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-71442063718110626162013-10-22T08:53:42.277+02:002013-10-22T08:53:42.277+02:00He has shocked her, alright! It's more than a ...He has shocked her, alright! It's more than a little sad :-(, but that's what she's been in the past, just a pet, a toy, something to be used at will... you're pretty much correct. Hopefully, Andrew will eventually learn of her past, so he can understand her better, but, who knows? She's not aware yet of the feelings of either of them, but she's getting there...<br /><br /Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-829802733418344542013-10-21T19:42:37.104+02:002013-10-21T19:42:37.104+02:00Dr. Stuart seems to have shocked Claire all the wa...Dr. Stuart seems to have shocked Claire all the way down to her toes! That's a little sad though, that she'd never been kissed before. It shows how impersonal her past abusive marriage must have been. She was a thing to be used sexually, with zero appreciation for her as a human. I wish there was some way for him to learn of her past, but as she seems to have kept that a secret, it may Mistyhttp://www.simsl3gacies.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-20823532890636522932013-10-18T10:10:30.628+02:002013-10-18T10:10:30.628+02:00Thanks! :-D Her reaction to the kiss was very sad,...Thanks! :-D Her reaction to the kiss was very sad, but that's what life has taught her :-(. The fact that she had never been kissed came as a surprise to me as well LOL, but the more I thought about it, the more sense it made... I mean, that jerk, as you call him, didn't "need" to connect with her at all -she was his to do with her as he chose, so why bother with kissing?-, yeahMarsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-83983732461920576152013-10-17T23:14:24.039+02:002013-10-17T23:14:24.039+02:00OMG I loved the double perspective you did here, C...OMG I loved the double perspective you did here, Claire, and Andrew. It must be so shocking to Claire to experience a kiss like that. I felt sad for her that she thought she had to go limp and check out because of what she feared was coming next. I love that she let Andrew explain a little about Olivia even though she was hurt by it. I'm so glad she didn't run away and that Andrew got to LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-84948814543134579542013-10-16T22:29:01.355+02:002013-10-16T22:29:01.355+02:00I could never imagine Claire behaving in any other...I could never imagine Claire behaving in any other way than that. And yes, it's sad, but she had never been kissed before... That "man" never bothered with such subtleties :-(. She couldn't help her fears, though, but at least she tried to overcome them, which is something already.<br /><br />Yes, Andrew did want to explain things to Claire, and that says a lot about his Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-70600890370810208462013-10-16T17:54:07.736+02:002013-10-16T17:54:07.736+02:00Aw, if that was corny, then I guess I love corny a...Aw, if that was corny, then I guess I love corny and cliches. This was so romantic and sweet and just lovely. And I loved Claire's reaction to the kiss, it's so Claire! I didn't realize she'd never been kissed before. Oh my, what a first kiss! I just wish she didn't have all those flashbacks (even for however briefly they were) while she was in his arms. Then the kiss would Valprehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15992942004048836531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-40277751177272608692013-10-14T16:20:32.990+02:002013-10-14T16:20:32.990+02:00No, it doesn't sound odd at all, it's real...No, it doesn't sound odd at all, it's really sad Claire's never been kissed :-(; but just put it this way: her first kiss has been with your (and mine) beloved doctor <3. She can't help thinking the worst, though, and she does need her defenses broken to some extent.<br /><br />Thanks for your comment on my buildings, I guess they turned out half decent, after all :-).<br /><brMarsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-61513484108353009952013-10-13T19:04:42.167+02:002013-10-13T19:04:42.167+02:00Phew! Wow. So I know this will sound odd, but poor...Phew! Wow. So I know this will sound odd, but poor Claire. To have never been kissed, and to instinctively think the worse is about to happen when it does happen. And to think that about Andrew just because of past experiences. And and and. *sigh. Dr.Andrew. <3 I hope he can tough it out a little longer still to break through Clarie's defenses. <br /><br />Aw! Your buildings look marvelousShakespearesSunshynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09019826982875949328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-64670837198071097002013-10-12T21:31:11.530+02:002013-10-12T21:31:11.530+02:00Aww, I'm glad you thought so :-D. You put ever...Aww, I'm glad you thought so :-D. You put everything about Andrew so wonderfully, I have very little to add. He is indeed a very sensitive man, I don't think the story would work at all if he weren't.<br /><br />Thank you for reading :-).Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-82034512031720217922013-10-12T05:28:06.318+02:002013-10-12T05:28:06.318+02:00Mmmm, awesome kiss. I know it's sitll hard on ...Mmmm, awesome kiss. I know it's sitll hard on Claire, but I'm glad she's starting to come around to Andrew,m and that's he's sensitive enough to back off before he pushed her too far. He mistook her hesitation for being in mourning, but he did sense it, and I think having a man who is sensitive to her needs will be important for Claire. since she doesn't dare speak aloud yangthecathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15083940950118677312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-415395653659667980.post-49787329793811463732013-10-11T12:26:59.929+02:002013-10-11T12:26:59.929+02:00Claire had never been kissed :-(, and that's w...Claire had never been kissed :-(, and that's why this was a whole new experience for her. I think it was the novelty of it that allowed her to "enjoy" it to some extent. But, we will see what happens the morning after...<br /><br />I remember that scene, and you did a great job :-). I never bothered with interiors (I didn't need them, anyway). Thanks :-D, but I just showed you Marsarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00521245679287631501noreply@blogger.com